In Gothic Fiction, certain types show up again and again: the loyal retainer, the obsessed scientist, the corrupt doctor, the greedy villain, the sickly invalid, the helpless child, the naive bride, the old eccentric, the mentally deranged person….
What’s interesting is that each character can assume several of these roles. For example, the mentally deranged person may also be the helpless child—or he may be the greedy villain, or the obsessed scientist, or the old eccentric at the end of his life. The newly arrived outsider could also be the naive bride or the sickly invalid or the obsessed scientist—or perhaps all of those. This “mix-and-match” ensures that the characters aren’t cardboard copies repeated in every story. Each of them can be male or female.
So now let’s look at these characters—or perhaps I should say, the roles characters in Gothic fiction assume.
THE NEWLY ARRIVED OUTSIDER
This is frequently the novel’s main character (MC). Sometimes, she’s the Naive Bride, or she may be revealed to be the True Heir.
Examples from literature: In Cousin Kate by Georgette Heyer, the MC is a poor relation who needs a place to live. Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë and Nine Coaches Waiting by Mary Stewart both feature governesses starting out in a new job. The MC in The Gabriel Hounds by Mary Stewart visits the Gloomy House because she is curious to meet her eccentric relative. In Rebecca by Daphne du Maurier she is the bride, taking up residence as her husband’s second wife. In Uncle Silas by Sheridan Le Fanu, orphaned heiress Maud Ruthyn goes to live with her guardian uncle.
THE GREEDY VILLAIN
Gothic villains are motivated by greed more than anything else. They may use cruelty and abuse their power to satisfy this greed. The Greedy Villain may be bitter because he himself has suffered great injustice, and perhaps he has devoted his life to revenge. If he’s the Obsessed Scientist, he’ll use his invention to get rich. If he’s the Evil Charmer, he’ll make his potential victim fall in love with him and convince everyone that he is innocent. Although evil, he may have a good and noble side to his character.
Examples from literature: In Cousin Kate by Georgette Heyer, Lady Broome, who sacrificed a lot to care for her sick husband, feels entitled to own the Gloomy House and will go to any lengths to keep it for herself and her descendants. In The Gabriel Hounds by Mary Stewart, the villains scheme to get Lady Harriet’s wealth. In Uncle Silas by Sheridan Le Fanu, the titular character—who is also the Abusive Guardian—schemes to get heiress Maud’s money.
THE BIGAMIST
He’s already married and wants to wed a new wife—either because he’s obsessively in love with the girl or because she’s an heiress and he wants her fortune. To achieve this, he denies his first wife’s existence, hides her away (in the underground chamber or the attic), fakes evidence that the marriage wasn’t valid (with the help of the Corrupt Priest) or poisons her (with the help of the Corrupt Doctor) so he’ll be a widower and free to take a new wife. Alternatively, the bigamist is truly widowed, but his deceased wife continues to rule the Gloomy House as a ghost, either terrorizing the new bride or warning her. Sometimes, the Bigamist and his wives are long dead, but their descendants survive, and when the bigamy comes to light, it changes the line of inheritance.
Examples from literature: In the earliest Gothic novel, The Castle of Otranto by Horace Walpole, Sir Manfred schemes to rid himself of his wife so he can marry a young princess. In Charlotte Brontë’s novel Jane Eyre, Mr. Rochester is the Bigamist. He loves the governess and wants to marry her, but already has a wife—a madwoman locked in the attic.
THE LOYAL RETAINER
This faithful servant may be the housekeeper, the butler, the secretary, or the lady’s maid. She has worked in this household for years or decades, perhaps since the days when the current master was a baby. Perhaps her parents and grandparents served the same family. The loyal retainer probably knows the Guilty Secret and may even be part of it. She’s very loyal to her master…. But there may be a twist: to which master? For example, her true master may be the immortal vampire living in the crypt below the Gloomy House. The Loyal Retainer may at the same time be the Corrupt Doctor, or the Ghost, or the Dog.
Examples from literature: In Daphne du Maurier’s novel Rebecca, the Loyal Retainer is the housekeeper Mrs. Danvers, and she is loyal to the master’s deceased first wife. In The Old Nurse’s Story by Elizabeth Gaskell, the nurse narrator is loyal first to the young couple who employ her, and then to their orphaned child.
THE OBSESSED SCIENTIST
A scientist, alchemist, or inventor, either an amateur or a professional, experiments with the latest technology or scientific formulas. His inventions may be benign (seeking a cure for cancer) or evil (developing a weapon of mass destruction). He is so obsessed with his experiments that he ruins his physical or mental health (making him the Sickly Invalid or the Mentally Deranged Person). He could be devoted to curing the sickly invalid, or he could carry out human experiments on the Captive, the Helpless Child, or the Mentally Deranged Person. Sometimes he’s the Loyal Retainer or the Corrupt Doctor. If you layer Science Fiction or Steampunk with Gothic, the Obsessed Scientist and his work may be at the centre of the plot.
Examples from literature: In Mary Shelley’s novel Frankenstein, the MC Victor Frankenstein is obsessed with creating a new person from the body parts of dead people. In Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde by Robert Louis Stevenson, Dr. Jekyll is a respected scientist who meddles with the dark side of science to create his alter ego, and can’t stop, even when he realizes the evil nature of Mr Hyde.
THE CORRUPT DOCTOR
This can be a medical doctor, a nurse, a physiotherapist, a naturopath, a masseur, or someone else with a healing role. Charged with caring for a patient who lives in the Gloomy House (the Sickly Invalid, the Mentally Deranged Person, the Helpless Child, or the Old Eccentric), the Corrupt Doctor deliberately makes the illness worse instead of better. He may be in the pay of the Greedy Villain, or he may pursue his own interests. He may drive his victim to insanity (so nobody will believe her when she reveals the sinister goings on), poison her slowly, keep her bedridden (so she can’t reveal the secret), or murder her (so someone else will inherit her wealth).
Examples from literature: In Georgette Heyer’s Cousin Kate, Dr. Delabole helps to hide the criminal insanity of the young heir. In The Gabriel Hounds by Mary Stewart, Dr. Henry Grafton schemes to get his share of Lady Harriet’s wealth.
THE SICKLY INVALID
This person needs constant care, and never leaves the Gloomy House. She may be suffering with the patience of an angel, or she may be a cranky demanding patient. Often, the Corrupt Doctor is in charge of caring for her. Sometimes, the Sickly Invalid is also the Helpless Child, but she could also be the Old Eccentric, the Naive Bride, the True Heir, the Captive, or the Mentally Deranged Person.
Examples from literature: In The Toll-Gate by Georgette Heyer, bedridden Sir Peter knows he’s about to die and has many regrets—but on his deathbed, he manages to pull off a scheme that will protect his granddaughter from the villains’ machinations. In The Old Nurse’s Story by Elizabeth Gaskell, Miss Furnivall is a wrinkled, nearly deaf octogenarian with a guilty secret from the days of her youth.
THE CORRUPT PRIEST
A religious professional (priest, monk, nun, shaman, rabbi, swami, meditation retreat leader…) inspires trust because of his role, and he abuses this position. As a Catholic priest, he betrays a secret he’s heard in confession. As a cult leader, he stirs up religious fervour to drive people to commit crimes in the name of faith. As a monk, he solicits donations for a charitable cause and keeps the funds for himself.
Examples from literature: In The Monk by Matthew Gregory Lewis, the viciously cruel Prioress Mother St. Agatha keeps a girl prisoner in the dungeons beneath the convent and spreads the word about her death. In Thomas M. Disch’s novel The Priest, Father Patrick Bryce is a Catholic priest with a paedophile past.
THE HELPLESS CHILD
The Helpless Child may be a baby, a toddler, or a teenager, but is definitely a minor in the eyes of the law. Who cares for her? Who is her legal representative? She may be in the power of the Abusive Guardian. The child is often the Sickly Invalid and/or the True Heir. If she’s the heir, then her fortune maybe administered by the Abusive Guardian, too. The Helpless Child is often a personification of angelic innocence; however, in some stories, she’s evil. She may also be innocent, but becomes possessed by an evil spirit that drives her to commit cruelties.
Examples from literature: In The Old Nurse’s Story by Elizabeth Gaskell, young Rosamond follows the ghost of a pretty little girl out into the cold and is found nearly frozen to death. In Nine Coaches Waiting, Philippe de Valmy is a lonely nine-year-old boy, owner of the opulent Château de Valmy and the title Comte de Valmy, but powerless in the hands of his guardians.
THE ABUSIVE GUARDIAN
The Abusive Guardian has charge of the Helpless Child—perhaps he’s simply an employed tutor paid to teach the child for a few hours every day, or perhaps he is her guardian in the legal sense, a quasi-parent who administers her fortune and makes decisions. He may scheme that she will not survive to reach adulthood (so he himself will inherit her wealth), or plan to marry her to his son, or to marry her himself to get his hands on her fortune. He will keep her isolated, perhaps on the grounds of her alleged ill health (in which case she’s also the Sickly Invalid or the Mentally Deranged Person), and instead of allowing her to go to school, he has her home-schooled.
Examples from literature: In Cousin Kate by Georgette Heyer, Lady Broome keeps her mentally ill son isolated, scheming to get him married at a young age so he will father a legal heir. In Nine Coaches Waiting, cynical disabled Léon de Valmy is not only the guardian of his nine-year-old nephew, but also the trustee of the boy’s property. In Uncle Silas by Sheridan Le Fanu, Silas is the guardian of his late brother’s daughter, and he abuses his power, first by trying to force her to wed his son, and then to plot her death.
THE NAIVE BRIDE
Shy, inexperienced in the ways of the world, poor, socially inept, without family or friends, the Naive Bride has fallen in love with the man who owns the Gloomy Place and moves in. He may turn out to be the Greedy Villain, the Obsessed Scientist, the Evil Charmer, or the Mentally Deranged Person, and she may find herself the Captive and perhaps destined to become the Mentally Deranged Person. She may also discover that she has married the Bigamist.
Examples from literature: In Daphne du Maurier’s novel Rebecca, the unnamed narrator marries a widower and naively assumes they’ll live happily ever after—but then discovers that his late wife Rebecca rules over their lives. In The Woman in White by Wilkie Collins, the orphaned heiress Laura Fairlie, guileless and gentle, finds that the man she’s fallen in love with and married wants her fortune and plots her death.
THE CAPTIVE
This person is in the power of the Evil Villain or the Obsessed Scientist. Maybe she’s recently arrived, stumbled upon the Guilty Secret, and therefore is not allowed to leave again. Or maybe she’s been imprisoned all her life, or her existence is inconvenient to someone. She’s probably locked into the underground chamber or the attic.
Examples from literature: In The Woman in White by Wilkie Collins, MC Laura is kept captive by her husband—at first at home, and then under a false identity in a lunatic asylum. In Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë, the mentally ill Bertha Mason is kept locked up in the attic.
THE OLD ECCENTRIC
Nearing the end of his life, the Old Eccentric is probably rich—but he might also have lost his fortune long ago, or maybe people merely suspect that he has riches hidden away. Sometimes the Old Eccentric has already died, and people search for his last will and testament, or they argue over whether the will is valid since the Old Eccentric was obviously a Mentally Deranged Person. Maybe the Old Eccentric died generations ago, and now he haunts the Gloomy House. Either way, the Old Eccentric’s last will and testament probably plays a role in the plot.
Example from literature: In The Gabriel Hounds by Mary Stewart, old Aunt Harriet chooses to live in the decaying splendour of an old palace near Beirut, dressed in male Arab garb, and changes her will every six months.
THE INSIDE CONFIDANT
This is a servant/fellow employee living in the Gloomy House whom the MC trusts. However, the Inside Confidant is powerless, and can’t do much more than warn the MC of specific dangers. The Inside Confidant can be a servant who depends on her job and can’t take risks, or she may be a fellow victim and is often brainwashed. It’s not entirely sure how trustworthy she really is. She may truly want to help the MC, but the master of the house has such power over her that she may cave in and betray the MC out of fear.
Example from literature: In Cousin Kate by Georgette Heyer, the MC’s maid is friendly and supportive, but is herself powerless.
THE MENTALLY DERANGED PERSON
Any kind of madness or mental instability works here. The character may simply get occasional bouts of paranoia, or she may have lingering PTSD and be otherwise sane. Perhaps she never got over the grief at the death of her child. Maybe she suffers from schizophrenia. She could be a raving lunatic or a criminally insane serial killer. Perhaps incest practised over generations has led to inbreeding and mental weakness. Perhaps she lives voluntarily in the Gloomy House, hoping that the quiet location will aid her recovery. Or perhaps her relatives keep her hidden here (probably in the underground chamber or the attic) because she would be an embarrassment in society. Maybe the Obsessed Scientist uses her as a human guinea pig. Or maybe she’s perfectly sane, but the Greedy Villain and the Corrupt Doctor conspire to drive her insane. Maybe she’s perfectly sane when she arrives, but thinks she’s going nuts because of the ghost’s activities.
Examples from literature: In Cousin Kate by Georgette Heyer, young Torquil is mentally unstable and commits cruel atrocities during periods of insanity. In Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë, violently insane Bertha Mason is kept locked up in the attic by her husband, who hides her existence.
THE SEMI-OUTSIDER
This character is closely connected to the family but isn’t part of it, and he knows the Gloomy House well but doesn’t live there. He could be a distant cousin who grew up in the Gloomy House and still visits often. The MC doesn’t know where the Semi-Outsider’s loyalties lie. In Gothic Romance, he often turns out to be the Love Interest, and sometimes also the True Heir.
Example from Literature: In Cousin Kate by Georgette Heyer, Phillip Broome is a relative who knows the Gloomy House and everyone in it well, but he’s doesn’t live there and isn’t part of the family.
THE ALLY OUTSIDE
The MC has a colleague, sister, friend, godmother, or other friendly person who cares about her well-being but is not able to be with her in the Gloomy House. The Ally Outside may have initially encouraged the MC to take this job, or she may have warned her against it. Distance prevents the Ally Outside from providing real help, although she contrives at least one visit. The villain perceives this visit as a danger, so he makes sure the visit is a short one and the MC gets no chance to talk alone with the Ally Outside. In Romance novels, the Ally Outside can be the Love Interest. In this case, the Ally Outside contrives to visit in secret several times.
Examples from literature: In Cousin Kate by Georgette Heyer, Mrs. Nidd used to be the MC’s childhood nurse. She’s the only one whom the MC can truly trust, but the villain intercepts their correspondence. In The Gabriel Hounds by Mary Stewart, the MC’s cousin Charles knows that she has gone to the Gloomy House, but will he realize she is in danger, and will he gain access?
THE LOVE INTEREST
Many Gothic short stories (and almost all Gothic novels) contain a Romance element. The MC falls in love (possibly at first with the wrong person, then with the Love Interest who turns out to be her true love). Often, the Love Interest is the master of the Gloomy House, the Semi-Outsider, or the Ally Outside. The Love Interest could also be another newly-arrived outsider. They may arrive separately (she’s a governess to the girls, he’s the tutor to the boys) or together (they’re newlyweds honeymooning in a remote castle).
Example from literature: Raoul de Valmy in Nine Coaches Waiting by Mary Stewart is a great example of a Love Interest character whose true nature is not revealed until the end. In many plot twists, the reader is led to believe him a noble hero and a ruthless villain in turns.
THE EVIL CHARMER
This character may make everyone—including the MC—like him and even fall in love with him. He then abuses their trust to his own ends. In some stories, he’s not universally liked, but a ruthless seducer of members of the opposite sex, who—especially in Historical fiction—ruins women. Often, he’s the master of the Gloomy House, but he could also be the visiting doctor or lawyer who seems on the MC’s side. Maybe he appears likeable and charming in the first chapters before he shows his true colours, or perhaps people know that he’s evil but still succumb to his demonic charm. The Evil Charmer could also be the Loyal Retainer, the Bigamist, or the Semi-Outsider.
Example from literature: In Jane Austen’s novel Northanger Abbey, dashing heir Captain Frederick Tilney seduces an ambitious young woman by leading her to expect marriage.
THE GHOST
A ghost haunts the Gloomy House—probably the underground chamber, the attic, the staircase, a corridor, or the picture gallery. She was either the victim or the perpetrator of a crime (most likely, murder, bigamy, or deceit over the inheritance) and wants to get the old wrong righted. She may seek to redeem herself for her own misdeed, or she may seek vengeance on the descendants of the person who did her wrong. Sometimes, the evil deed committed by or against her is mirrored by the modern-day Guilty Secret.
Examples from literature: In The Old Nurse’s Story by Elizabeth Gaskell, the ghost of a pretty little girl lures the child Rosamond out into the freezing cold. In Nocturne for a Widow by Amanda DeWees, the ghost of the late first wife slashes the dress the MC was going to wear to a special event—but does she mean to harm or to protect?
THE DOG
Surprisingly, many works of Gothic Fiction feature a canine character. It can be a fierce guard dog or the master’s faithful companion (in which case it takes on the role of Loyal Retainer). It might also be the Newly Arrived Outsider’s beloved pet, or one of the Obsessed Scientist’s laboratory animals. It might be a monster or the Ghost. The Dog likely has strong likes and dislikes, and it may notice suspicious smells or dig up a clue to the guilty secret.
Example from literature: The Dog in the Sherlock Holmes story The Hound of the Baskervilles by Arthur Conan Doyle is both a mythological beast and a real-life savage canine.
THE BLINKERED PROFESSIONAL
Thoroughly competent in his role, the blinkered professional unfortunately doesn’t see the big picture. He carries out the task he’s been hired for, and nothing else.
As a doctor, he refuses to prescribe the harmful medication to the Sickly Invalid or to sign the death certificate without an autopsy. As a lawyer, he refuses to issue illegal documents, and he even warns the bride that it’s not in her interest to sign the prenuptial agreement. He remains firm, even under pressure from the villain—but with his duties concluded, he won’t involve himself further.
When this person arrives on the scene, the MC is hopeful, believing that this unbiased expert will see the truth—but the Blinkered Professional isn’t interested.
Example from literature: In The Woman in White by Wilkie Collins, lawyer Vincent Gilmore points out that the terms of the marriage contract are not in the bride’s interest, and warns her guardian not to sign the agreement.
THE TRUE HEIR
He’s the one who has inherited the Gloomy House, probably because of the Old Eccentric’s bizarre will. He might also be the one who was defrauded of his inheritance (due to bigamy or some other crime). He may be the Helpless Child whose fate and fortune are in the hands of the Abusive Guardian. Or maybe he hasn’t inherited yet, but stands to inherit, and his evil relatives want him out of the way before the wealthy Old Eccentric dies. In some novels, the Semi-Outsider, the Loyal Retainer, the Love Interest, the Newly Arrived Outsider and/or the MC herself turn out to be the True Heir.
Since the True Heir’s identity is often revealed as a twist at the end of the book, I won’t give examples from literature and spoil your reading surprise.
YOUR TURN
Think of Gothic novels you’ve read. Identify the “roles” you recognize from my descriptions. (You may be surprised how many you find.) Do any of the characters combine dual or even multiple roles?
Besides the character roles I’ve outlined above, can you think of others which are common in Gothic fiction?
Tell us about this in the Comments section.
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Rayne Hall MA is the author of over 100 books, mostly Dark Fantasy and Gothic Horror, e.g. The Bride’s Curse: Bulgarian Gothic Ghost and Horror Stories. She is also the acclaimed editor of Gothic, Fantasy, and Horror anthologies (e.g. Among the Headstones: Creepy Tales from the Graveyard, and author of the bestselling Writer’s Craft series for advanced-level writers, including the bestselling Writer’s Craft series e.g. Writing Gothic Fiction.
Born and raised in Germany, Rayne Hall has lived in China, Mongolia, Nepal, and Britain. Now she resides in a village in Bulgaria, where men perform the annual demon dance, ghosts and sirens beckon, and abandoned decaying houses hold memories of a glorious past.
Her lucky black rescue cat Sulu often accompanies her when she explores spooky derelict buildings. He delights in walking across shattered roof tiles, scratching charred timbers, and sniffing at long-abandoned hearths. He even senses the presence of ghosts…but that’s another story.
Rayne has worked as an investigative journalist, development aid worker, museum guide, apple picker, tarot reader, adult education teacher, belly dancer, magazine editor, publishing manager, and more, and now writes full time.
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